Here's an example of a full-length essay:
Dear Mr. Johnson,
REMIND HIM WHO YOU ARE AND WHY YOU ARE WRITING.
By all means, you should hire Byron he is a hard working, educated, self starter and a motivated person.He has all the characteristic that you are looking for. Although he doesn't have much experience hands on with waste management, he definitely has the brains to figure things out. GOOD POINT. NOW GIVE A VERY SPECIFIC EXAMPLE. Bryon finish what he starts, Pete does not. Pete claims that he dro0lo zspped out of a community college and said “All my classes were garbage” I don’t think you want that kind of representative to your business. +++Bryon will bring nothing but success to this company. Hire Byron and you won't regret it.
Bryon is a very hardworking guy WHO attended Harvard University and got his B.S degree in business THERE, graduatING in the top 5% of his class. He wrote an award winning paper his senior YEAR entitled: “Down on the Dumps: Nuclear -power4eed Trash Compactors as a Viable Alternative to Landfills in the Twenty-first Century”. TALK A BIT ABOUT WHAT HIS PAPER WAS PROBABLY ABOUT.All of this work is pointing towards success. Harvard's acceptance rate rate is a 5.9% which means about 6 out of 100 people that apply to Harvard only 6 get accepted. Byron is a self starter, you don't need to tell him what to do step by step, give him a task and it will be done right and efficient. He's motivated to get better at what he does each and everyday. He has a bright future wherever he goes. On the other hand Pete isn't so dedicated like Byron is. HOW CAN YOU TELL? Why would you want someone that doesn't finish what they start? Pete moved to Salem without out a job,typically you get the job first then move.ADD A SENTENCE.
Pete is a former powerlifter who can bench press 530 pounds. This to me reminds me of really good athletes that don't get to play college sports because they don't meet the requirements to attend the college of their choice. Pete is that really good powerlifter that lacks in the education requirement you can be //??the best football player, basketball player, baseball player and also the best powerlifter but if you don't got the grades you don't play college ball. TRANSITION SENTENCE NEEDED Pete went to a community college and did not finish what he started he is a strong guy with no education. CONCLUDE EACH PARAGRAPH
Byron claims that he won't be bothered by the smell of odor so that won't be a problem.Under the circumstances that Pete was in involved in a accident that severed his olfactory nerve, taking away his sense of smell. I believe that right there is not good for your business. Incase of something was burning in the facility and Pete couldn't recognize that it would be bad news from there. Pete doesn't have experience either. He worked at the docks for 2 years. Byron hasn't had a job because he has been in school his whole life. He claims that he is very excited to make this his first successful job.
In the final analysis I believe and you should too, that Byron is the guy you have been looking for to for fill the position in the ACME Waste Management, Inc. He Byron is going to bring money to your company with his great ideas. There isn't a guy out there who could represent the company like Byron. Pete is an uneducated man who is a former powerlifter that use to work at docks who has no sense of smell. Byron is a educated man who attended Harvard who graduated top 5% in his class. Hire Byron Mr.Johnson, you won't regret it.
EXAMPLE 2:
March 5, 2018
Dear, Mr. Lacklyn
PRETTY GOOD JOB :^)
NOW:
ESTABLISH THE SITUATION:
WHO ARE YOU?
WHY ARE YOU WRITING? (YOU NEED TO FILL A POSITION)
HOW DID YOU MEET PETE? WHAT’S YOUR GENERAL IMPRSSION OF PETE?
You should hire Pete Domske because he fits all of the criteria in your add for the job. He has strong arms proven by his, impressive, 530 pound bench press. He can also withstand strong odors due to a tragic accident that severed his olfactory nerve, leaving him not able to smell. These things make it pretty easy for him to complete the job or task required of him, because he is strong he can work for along time without getting fatigued and because he has no sense of smell he can work through some bad smells. He is the logical choice for this job because of his work experience, strong arms, no sense of smell, and his passion for manual labor.
Pete's cousin Matt Domske showed him the article in the paper in wWashington, and Pete being the self starter he is he moved down to salem knowing what he wanted. This shows a lot about Pete about how he was willing to move somewhere new to get a job that he knew fit him perfectly.EXPLAIN THE IMPORTANCE OF HAVING A SELF-STARTER AND GENERALLY MOTIVATED WORKER. He also has a fire in his heart of manual labor, realizing after two years of college that he did not want to go anymore and that he has a passion for hard working.
Pete has the arms for the job to, because as you may recall in your ad you placed in the statesman journal you said this job requires someone with strong arms. Pete definitely fits this build of strong arms with his astonishing bench press of 530 pounds. This guy can definitely move around those miniscule cans that don't weigh more than a water bottle to him, moving them with ease. He has been training his whole life so his muscles are used to the wear and tear of a job. You won't have to wait for him to get big arms because he already has them. WAIT. WHY IS IT IMPOERTANT TO BE ABLE TO MOVE THINGS AND MOVE THEM WITH EASE? EXPLAIN, EXPLAIN, EXPLAIN
The last point on why pete is the no brainer for this job is the fact that pete has no sense of smell because of a tragic accident. It happened while he was working hard on the docks when a crane dropped a small crate and it landed on Pete's head lucky for pete he was wearing a hard hat, but he still lost his sense of smell. This is another aspect of why Pete is such a perfect fit for this company. The man has no smell so he can not be bothered by the strong stench of garbage. He will be able to the the full extent of his job without complaining or needing a mask.
So in conclusion Pete Domsky is the perfect fit for your company because of his strong arms, passion for manual labor, self starter, and he has no sense of smell. All of these things you put in your ad and these seemed to be the most important. If Pete is not a perfect model for this ad, then I don't know who would be. He would help your company out a ton and make you filthy rich by how productive and how little time he wastes.
